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:iconpsoyman:
Well, t's not easy to write a critique...
And I am not a professional critic (and don't want to be so)
;-)
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I love this photo. Something fresh and some kind of purity in the global scene, the pose, the model choice and the ambiance.
The light is really nice and sweet, coming through the window and drawing a triangle in the center of the shot.
I have nothing to critique about the shot shot itself, it's a wonderful shot.
No, nothing to say about it... and I don't like to make or read critiques about the photographies because they represent the photographer mind and vision of the things and the world (except when there are technical mistakes in the shooting process, in this case critiques can help, but that's not the case here, completly the opposite !!!! )
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The only thing I can critique is post treatment relative.
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Considering the light, if I was the post treatment operator, I should have kept the picture more in the grays giving less pastel color for the model and the tissue valorization. But it's a question of personal taste ! So this critique doesn't really makes a big sense...
:-)
The only thing I won't have made as post treatment operator is the canva frame around the picture. It gives the picture a kind of oldie origin in complete opposition to the photo subject wich you kept close to the original shoot and to the model. In this way the frame seems a little stranger to the picture and behave as a gratuitous element in the picture.
From my point of view, integrating the frame should have needed to post treat the picture surface with oldies zones in order to recall the canva frame presence. But I don't think the frame to be indispensable to the picture. When you zoom in the photo, letting the frame out of the screen, you realize that everithing is working as well as when you have the frame in your vision.
So, the only critique I can make is that the frame was not really insdispensable in your really nice and emotive picture.
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But that's only from my point of view, again, I am not a professional critic,
really appreciate your galleries and your work (and especially your monochrome works).
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See you,
Pierre
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It's always fun to write a critique when all you have to say is going to be positive. There isn't anything that I don't like about this image. It seems to me to be technically spot-on- I love how the light spills across the model and gets caught in the fabric. The fabric seems fragile- so does the model. There's an inescapable eroticism to the image, but it still manages to be "innocent". I look at this picture & I find myself thinking "Faery" or some sort of adolescent girl/butterfly hybrid. Whatever she's meant to be- this was one of those surprising images that I first discovered surfing in the "artistic nudes" category, & one of those rare pictures that stands out from the rest, & truly begs a closer look.
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:iconalxmangart:
alxmangart Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014
Beautifull !
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:iconbodyscape18:
bodyscape18 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013
Slender, elegant, composed, fresh and feminine .... amazing,fleshy, firm, little pussy ... superb.
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:iconnitisara:
Nitisara Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013
Прямо фея :)
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:iconxaltair:
xaltair Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013
lovely lighting again and post processing
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:iconmichaelcphotography:
MichaelCPhotography Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013   Photographer
Nice shot, and I love this model!
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:iconmarcos941:
marcos941 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Beautiful...
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:iconsydneyrome:
sydneyrome Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012
I love the lighting and the fact that she has her eyes closed (like she's preparing to ascend to heaven)
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:iconraylaveau:
raylaveau Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012
I want to.. heh..
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:iconangela-k-rough:
Angela-K-Rough Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Swoon
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:iconuriy1966:
Uriy1966 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Professional Interface Designer
Вы в своих последних работах просите критику, я не фотограф и оценка моя может быть чисто с позиции "нуба".......каждая (см. все) ваша фотография ( и девочки естественно ) - это просто шедевр.
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:iconaltering:
Altering Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Professional Photographer
Great work, bravo!
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:iconpreshrink:
preshrink Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Professional Photographer
Beautiful photograph.
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:iconnazou999:
Nazou999 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012
great!!
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:iconbelimawr:
belimawr Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012   Photographer
Amazing
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:iconfeedthegods:
feedthegods Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012
have to ask the same as wulfman65, how old is the model? - I realise there are plenty of girls who aren't so 'well developed' breast-wise which makes them look younger, and well with all the waxing these days you really can't tell in terms of pubic hair - but those points aside, she does look young....
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:icondachimas:
dachimas Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012
he's a professional not an idiot...
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:iconphotoport:
photoport Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Professional Photographer
24)
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:iconchrissiered:
ChrissieRed Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Professional General Artist
very cool!
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:iconrojpix:
Rojpix Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012
classicly light... almost ethereal nice work
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:iconraylaveau:
raylaveau Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012
:love: I think she is gorgeous.. love thin women.. nothing wrong with her at all.. the photo is very well composed and the feel of it awesome. Thank you for sharing
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:iconmaurizio75g:
maurizio75g Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
good picture, good light and atmosphere but... anorexic girl :(
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:iconserenavampire734:
SerenaVampire734 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Just because she's skinny doesn't necessarily mean she's anorexic. I get that all the time and it drives me crazy. I wish everyone would be sensitive to different body types.
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:iconwulfman65:
wulfman65 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Professional Photographer
this model is 18+ ?
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:icondachimas:
dachimas Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012
he's a professional not an idiot...
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:iconladyannadawn:
ladyAnnadawn Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012
wow she is very cute and so sexy
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:iconlzwl12:
lzwl12 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012
Very sensual photo, amazing work!
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:iconthandav:
thandav Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Professional General Artist
she looks cook here
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:iconsuvelis:
Suvelis Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012
tres chic :-)
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:iconseerssword:
SeersSword Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012   General Artist
Beautiful.
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:iconmark-xipil:
Mark-Xipil Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Student General Artist
I love the composition, very ghost like in nature.
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:iconortonphoography12:
OrtonPhoography12 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Professional Photographer
The 'lines' of the portrait are all parallel with the frame, if the models head was turned slightly either direction, or even the camera tilted and looking up to her would add a nice effect to this. Love it nonetheless, the color is simply amazing.
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:iconphotoport:
photoport Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Professional Photographer
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:iconjjonesjr69:
JJonesJr69 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Love the old timey look -- not sure I would change anything
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:iconedwardcarlos:
EdwardCarlos Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Professional General Artist
Brilliant as usual!
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:iconhueman69:
Hueman69 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Lovely photo! Love the wet plate look!!!!
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:iconcskadoz:
cskadoz Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012   General Artist
:omg: :love: . . . sh-h! she's an angel!
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:iconfangled-robin:
Fangled-Robin Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012
An absolute dreamgirl.
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:iconpopandroid:
popandroid Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012
beautiful
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:iconnomad55:
Nomad55 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Very beautiful shot
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:iconmorningstarskid:
morningstarskid Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Professional Artist
Nice light work...
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:iconrastafic:
rastafic Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012
splendid
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:iconfabiokeiner:
FabioKeiner Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
kate is dreaming
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:iconpwlldu:
pwlldu Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012
yes, you are right, out of this world.
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:iconfabiokeiner:
FabioKeiner Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
she reminds me of a famous americacon avantgarde singer - meredith monk - in the days of her youth :)
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:iconalembic-lynx:
Alembic-Lynx Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Professional Photographer
lovely Pavel ..wow
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:iconedwardv:
Edwardv Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012
:)
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