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Expanded version of the book "My favorite models" [link]
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Critique by PhotoEXmachina Mar 17, 2013, 9:20:18 AM
I think your lighting and color are perfect in this image. The low contrast and soft drift into shadow is sublime.

I think the body position is very strong: angled from the camera, but parallel to the light source. Those highlights along her back and legs are just heavenly.

The only thing I would do differently would be to have her head turned to face the window. Faces kind of take over a photo, and the lighting and pose in this are so wonderful, I think it might be stronger to force the viewer to just focus on them, and leave identity to the imagination.
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:icongrey8wolf:
Grey8Wolf Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2015  Professional Photographer
Beautiful photo!
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:iconwaqarrasheed:
WaqarRasheed Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2014  Professional Interface Designer
i'm coming :D
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:iconlplturtledove:
LPLTURTLEDOVE Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014
Nice........Soft image...........Just perfect model!
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:iconphotorotic:
Photorotic Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2013
What a wonderful image!
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:iconmark45xxx:
mark45xxx Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013
Very very beautiful.
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:iconchocolatecookiecrumb:
Chocolatecookiecrumb Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Such a beautiful composition! :heart:
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:iconluissalomon:
LuisSalomon Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013
Su silueta es preciosa. =)
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:iconopusmax:
Opusmax Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013
I actually really like the the models face is turned toward the camera. The circles in the rug lead you nicely to the face and make for a strong composition.
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:iconworldtansun:
worldtansun Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Professional Interface Designer
that's great!
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:iconrksmiley:
RKSmiley Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2013  Professional Photographer
Incredible use of space! Love it!
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:iconauspics:
auspics Featured By Owner May 31, 2013
wow very nice!
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:iconweareone:
Weareone Featured By Owner May 30, 2013
Spread...please!
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:iconrafe4292:
rafe4292 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013
damn strait
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:iconperezart:
PerezArt Featured By Owner May 22, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
it's 2:40
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:iconzorzii:
zorzii Featured By Owner May 14, 2013
amazing pic
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:iconshylah-d:
Shylah-D Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
so lovely
thanks for sharing
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:iconiambond:
iambond Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2013
i am surprised.
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:iconkpeters626:
KPeters626 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013
featured:[link]
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:iconelven-samurai:
Elven-Samurai Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013
Beautiful! :)
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:iconsynax444:
synax444 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013
I like the scale here, it feels like I'm standing in the room, great shot, and of course I might as well state the undeniable, gorgeous model.
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:iconslyfxz:
SlyFXZ Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
A tush to heart for sure! Fav'd!
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:iconcskadoz:
cskadoz Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013   General Artist
:glomp: . . . :hump:
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:iconchaosfive-55:
Chaosfive-55 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Superb!!!
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:iconyanshee:
yanshee Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013   Photographer
Wonderful !
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:icongabrielbb:
GabrielBB Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013
Beautiful, sweet, pretty girl
Sweet legs, sweet, delicious butt
Hugs and kisses for the model


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:iconn-l-e:
n-l-e Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
stunning!
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:iconccbig:
ccbig Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Fantastic capture! Bravo!
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:iconphotoexmachina:
PhotoEXmachina Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Professional Photographer
I think our lighting and color are perfect in this image. The softness is wonderful.

The only thing I would do differently would be to have her head turned to face the window. Faces kind of take over a photo, and the lighting and pose in this are so wonderful, I think it would be stronger to force the viewer to just focus on them, and leave identity to the imagination.

Wonderful image regardless.
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:iconphotoexmachina:
PhotoEXmachina Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Professional Photographer
sorry, that was meant to be in the critique section.
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:iconphotoexmachina:
PhotoEXmachina Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Professional Photographer
crap, that was meant to be in the critique section... sorry about that.
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nathandbrazil Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Perfect composition and lighting.
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:iconsoulgraphica:
Soulgraphica Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013
Expressive :)
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:iconkraeved:
Kraeved Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013
Black border is not wanted here.
Square crop makes image ponderous.
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:iconmalaugusto:
malaugusto Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013   Photographer
This gorgeous work has been featured here: People and Portraits Spotlight Vol. 51.
Looking forward to seeing more art from you at #devPREMIUM!

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:iconflarc:
flarc Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013
great shot. tone are very soft. sultry.
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:iconmvmn:
MVMn Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013
Needs second girl, shorter one - then you can make the clock complete.
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:iconjoswankodaigo:
JoswanKodaigo Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013
Everything evokes peace. Love it!
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:iconjesse00769:
jesse00769 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
'purity' is the word that comes to mind. beautiful.
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:iconredracer01:
redracer01 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013
Exquisite carpet!
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:iconsajikohei:
SajiKohei Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Professional General Artist
This picture seems to speak volumes. It's very beautiful.
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:iconwestcpw:
westcpw Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
breathtaking.. the subtlleness of the rug and the decor.... its awesome
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:iconebolabears:
EbolaBears Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013
That room seats like 20 people:P

Nice work!
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:icongrodpro:
grodpro Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Professional Photographer
Excellent!
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:iconartofwei:
ArtOfWei Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Professional General Artist
What a lovely room!
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:iconfrankt:
FrankT Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
that's just totally perfect
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:iconimagetype:
ImageType Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013
almost look like CGI
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:iconjrocustoms:
jrocustoms Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice. My favorite position too. ;)
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:iconprojecttrinity:
ProjectTrinity Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013
Yes, yes, lovely lady. But who else here was like:

"....Good god; that rug is *amazing*."

And pretty much focused on that from then on?

#WritersMan
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:iconmiroislost:
MiroIsLost Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013
Everything looks so clean and pristine.... except for that stuff underneath the chair. Are those dirty socks?
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:iconrobinchanop:
robinchanop Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That's what I noticed.... It is such a beautiful picture though!
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