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The only critique that i can make is that the composition of the girl is too centered, in my opinion if the back of the model was more to the left edge of the photograph so that the photograph appears more open to the viewer. Other than that the exposure is phenomenal and it was a great choice to have this picture in black and white. The models posture is interesting, relaxed, but very expressive all in the same as well as her facial expression holding the viewers attention. Great photograph! It looks very editorial and high-fashion. I Love it!
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Critique by Edwardv Aug 24, 2013, 2:07:55 PM
I disagree with ~xxsindosyxx assessment that "the composition of the girl is too centered." If you look closely at the photograph you will notice that the chair is not center, thus the girl is not center. Her bottom is slightly over the edge of the chair, her front foot is in 1/3 grid composition and the back foot is centered in the chair. I like the way the white sox add contrast to the shades of blacks to light grey. The pose is excellent, especially with her left hand hanging over her right shoulder; the position of her face facing the viewer adds mystery since its slight dark. I personally find this photograph erotic without being nude. Temptation is the feeling I get with her look.
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sydneyrome Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2015
Lovely pose.
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:iconsplatterpunk1970:
SplatterPunk1970 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
someone needs to take care of the mouse running round the room... nah jk. Nice pic very artsy.
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tony-rhodes-gunair Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2015   General Artist
very impressive ! great job !
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MiniGiantessDotCom Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2015
Oh, wow. This is gorgeous.
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artiztul Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
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Aerozopher Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2014
super sexy.. and those legs and knees... uhuuu
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:icongrafmason:
grafmason Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2014
beautiful.
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:iconbisquie:
bisquie Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Beautiful grey tones!
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:icon13suffixes:
13suffixes Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2014   Traditional Artist
Are all your photos darkroom, or do you also dabble in digital photography?
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:iconredetzke:
redetzke Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
dramatic light, great pose. the sepia was a good choice. the only thing I would change would be to pull back a bit to see the entire chair - I think it would have made for a much stronger composition. 
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:iconignavius:
ignavius Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2014  Professional Photographer
i like that polaroid look on the edges.
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:icondarth-gerko:
darth-gerko Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2014  Professional General Artist
:clap:
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:iconnehooo:
Nehooo Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2014
Beautiful picture!
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:iconlaurens-world:
Laurens-World Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2014  Student General Artist
I just featured you here :) My First Feature
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:iconrhepur:
RHEPUR Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2014
Not too centered and nevertheless agree with xxsindosyxx. Very beautiful compo with great model looking like almost a few wild and disarming
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:iconoctopusmagnificens:
octopusmagnificens Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014
Superb.
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:iconldsdad:
Ldsdad Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice. Definitely erotic w/o nudity. I look at it and in my imagination I see a vampire, perhaps on the rooftop on the other side of the street, looking at me and getting ready to pounce. 
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:icondecophoto32:
decophoto32 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Great photo.
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:iconanalog414:
analog414 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014
I do like the photo. Photoport I like all your work. Im not crazy with the pixel look though. But I do realize this is by design.
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:iconcherokeewarrior1964:
CherokeeWarrior1964 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Professional Photographer
an amazing photo the shadows and lighting are wonderful
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:iconking-of-limbs:
King-Of-Limbs Featured By Owner May 26, 2014
Very, very sexy girl. Love the pose, the outfit, everything. Very sexy.
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:iconenjeru7:
Enjeru7 Featured By Owner May 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
this is a really awesome pose. I love the way she looks like and her expressions are really cool :D
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:iconuser48:
User48 Featured By Owner May 2, 2014
Absolutely Fine! :P
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:icongalinas-claim:
Galinas-Claim Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014
Love the outfit, too!
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:icongalinas-claim:
Galinas-Claim Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014
This is the shot that drew me here.  Love it!  Sexy pose, cute expression!
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:iconalpenni:
Alpenni Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014
sweetie, nice position
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:icondegravone:
Degravone Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Great simple pose, so beautiful
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:iconreferencedesk:
ReferenceDesk Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014  Student Artist
She looks like she's perched atop the chair, ready to pounce. Scary.
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:iconjoel-wade:
Joel-Wade Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014   General Artist
Beautiful work!
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:iconstuart-dillon:
Stuart-Dillon Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
love the pose very different to the norm 
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:iconaquiliris:
Aquiliris Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
She reminds me Catwoman somehow. ;)
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:iconsnake1226:
snake1226 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2014
Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart 
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TimMcJimFromPl Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2014
Amazing.
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:iconlentpirls:
lentpirls Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014
I really like this one.
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:icontbsmile:
tbsmile Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014
Very good composition. Beautiful model, beautiful lights. Nod

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:iconamoralisch:
amoralisch Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014
stunning 
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:iconthejohn59:
THEJOHN59 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014
Waouuuu ! 
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:iconrecklezz84:
recklezz84 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Stunning pose!
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:iconsonjoo:
Sonjoo Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014
wowNod 
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:iconsamvena:
SamVena Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I really like the way you let your models pose.
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:icontheogroen:
theogroen Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013  Professional Photographer
wonderful shot. Thatīs the moment.
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:iconfotoasylum:
fotoasylum Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013
Great capture!
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:iconmistikfantasy:
Mistikfantasy Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Dman! I said DAMN!!!
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:iconrahas3:
rahas3 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Love that pose she's in. Great light vs. dark effect love the blurred edges and background.
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:iconthehiddendandy:
TheHiddenDandy Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2013
Nice pose!
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:iconsaddust:
Saddust Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013

Birdy (^v^) Beautiful

 

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:iconmichelyahni:
Michelyahni Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013
well done
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Chief-Judge Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013  Professional General Artist
A great mix of lust and mystery from the model.  The rule of thirds is not absolute, but I think is satisfied anyway in this portrait.  Eg. model's face in top RH third of composition and bum in bottom LH third.  Two obvious focal points balancing the centred pose.  In my humble opinion, It's a great piece. 
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shveal Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013  Student Photographer
absolutely perfect
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