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:icondyronl:
The sensuality in this picture is palpable. Anticipation? No, the lingering impact of an incredible night. The mussed sheets, pillow case nearly torn off, the composition of the room is just enough to accent the mood set by your model, and draw attention to her. This is all deliberate clearly and for that I give you your vision rating. The originality suffers, because frankly it's just been done before. Your technique is spot, it's a beautiful B&W with a subtle vignette. The impact was strong from the get go, the scene comes together beautifully, model, set, and the photograph itself meld to create the picture of sensuality. The only thing I could say as far as increasing that would be a slight tilt up of the head of your model, enough to catch a look in her eyes, have her gaze longingly off the side of the shot, or alternatively a tilt down and to the left/right to catch one revealed eye, and have the other concealed with her hair, I think that slight touch could have pushed the image over the edge. All in all, wonderfully done :iconphotoport: , I tip my hat to you.
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I like this photo and thought that the model did a great job with her posture. I enjoyed the depth of field that the photographer went with. I think that this photo would work in color as well as black and white. Constructive criticism would be that I would like to see a stronger contrast in back lighting. It's an excellent photo, and this is entirely subjective obviously, but if there were more back lighting on the model, or perhaps from another angle, it would accentuate her dimples and lines in her body more. Again, it's a fantastic picture, very erotic, and i thought it was well composed.
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:iconneedit700:
needit700 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2015
I can only imagine how it would feel to be with her
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:icongmarr:
gmarr Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014
Sexy is more than a good looking model or pose. It's the feeling/emotion the image gives you. This says so much and is such a simple look. Excellent.
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:iconmark45xxx:
mark45xxx Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014
nice.
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:iconrevburnsie-redux:
RevBurnsie-Redux Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
There's a wonderful sense of intimacy in this image.  It slides along a line between a candid personal shot and a professional capture that makes you look a second time.  

The model is a perfect choice with the figure to compliment the position and you were in the perfect spot to capture the mind's eye.  
Bravo.
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:iconkhialat:
Khialat Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014
She's stunning!! :thumbsup:
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:iconjoergjohannmueller:
JoergJohannMueller Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
So beautiful. Wonderful done.
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:iconb3rko:
B3rko Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014
Great Shot, I love it!
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:iconvananroy:
vananroy Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014
look natural.....
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:iconvandum:
Vandum Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014
very nice
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:iconlaughbutts:
LaughButts Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
BUTT WHAT A WONDERFUL BUTT

BUTT
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:iconaduncanator:
aduncanator Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014   Photographer
That is a great photo of a beautiful woman. First class, and I am not huge fan of nudes as a genre.
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:icongrey8wolf:
Grey8Wolf Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Professional Photographer
Wow...fantastique!
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:iconbastion73:
Bastion73 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014
With the risk of sounding redundant and repeating what has already been said by others, I'll simply just congratulate you and your model for this stunning and beautiful piece of work!
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:iconalan-h-bruce:
Alan-H-Bruce Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
spectacular image…!
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:iconohcult:
OhCult Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014
Awesome. The model is amazing, and the photo make me fall in love ! 
Keep the good job :peace:
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:icondesrawr:
Desrawr Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014
So beautiful...
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:iconalexandern:
alexandern Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014
Your works so always emotional! Thanks you!Hug 
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:iconmephistodin:
Mephistodin Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014
That which bankrupt dudes like me could never get.
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:iconbella-ts:
bella-ts Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014
You wouldn't happen to have her phone number handy? 
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:iconjbellcomic:
jbellcomic Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014
wow!
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:iconalphafrequency:
AlphaFrequency Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
love 
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:iconstan5757:
stan5757 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014
I think you do a pretty good job photographing, Keep it up.
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stan5757 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014
Nice.
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:iconhslc:
hslc Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014
niceley shot and Shes hot
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:iconbludemonite:
BluDemonite Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
she's sexy and all, but how is this art?
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:iconkandymann:
KandyMann Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014
I know! I should start taking titty pictures. That'll make me famous.
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darkweb22 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
The perspective, the depth, how she's posed, how her hair falls, the sheets actually keep catching my eye (funny, yeah I know), the bars at the foot of the bed, the curve of her spine, how her hands are placed, the odd selective focus, many other things. I could point out a thousand shots on DA that really are just 'titty pictures' and this isn't one of them.
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Edd295 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014
people ask this all the time, just ignore it, deviantart is full of this stuff
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:iconigarin1:
Igarin1 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014  Professional Writer
Exquisite
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:iconpromet-he-us:
Promet-he-us Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014   General Artist
Beautifully shaped model, great angle and great set up. Thank you for sharing this wonderful picture!

:typerhappy::clap::worship::+fav:
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:iconryanjgill:
RyanJGill Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014   Artist
amazing curve ratio
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:iconphon3tic:
Phon3tic Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014
Beautiful model and a beautiful shot.
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:iconcarterdana:
carterdana Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014
I like the soft diffusion with selective focus. The natural jagged folds in the environment add a nice contrast in texture to the smoothness and curve of the model. Great shot!!
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aLxCorNeLL Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014
Absolutely stunning!
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chinoise56 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
The diagonal line of the model in the frame, lighting, softness & smooth skin of the model vs the chaos of the bed - All very well executed & captured.
 - A stunning image & Absolute Purrfection
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Sadistyk08 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014
nice i like the candid feel to this also the noise works well...almost looks like i would be on one of those t-shirts or tanks
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darthmordis Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I love B&W photos. One of the things I like best about this photo is the soft focus. It softens the edges of the photo, giving it a vaguely dream-like quality. The muted lighting draws beautiful shadows. The model is stunning and very expressive. A very beautiful photo.
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n-l-e Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
wonderful
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FreeBUT Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
The crumpled bedsheets and blanket of a world in turmoil... with the smooth lines of the model portraying hope and strength in a center of corruption.... a contrast that brings peace to the heart of the viewer...  I love it!
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Beavis-Felidea Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014
Very Sexy!
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:iconprojectx2501:
Projectx2501 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014
Looks so fuckable.
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:icondarkweb22:
darkweb22 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
If that's all you see, go to a porno site
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:iconbananasam:
BananaSam Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Scarily skinny.
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ErikRoger Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014
Scarily? Really? That bad? So you're saying you're concerned? Or are you just taking a jab at thinner women like many do that is as fickle and rude as pointing out overweight "flaws" on someone? Female models can never win. The same people who point out they are too thin (who usually don't seem to know what anorexia actually looks like) will instantly point out the smallest pocket of cellulite on the same model. What was your point of sharing "scarily thin?"
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BananaSam Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014  Student Digital Artist
I'm not concerned, nor am I pointing out any "flaws". I just said what came to mind; my opinion. Her butt bones freak me out.
I don't have to post something positive on every single piece of art, you know.
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ErikRoger Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014
Scarily skinny with butt bones you find freaky.  Those are negative things not up to your par (or opinion).  You are stating what you think are flaws in other words.  Sure, you can write whatever  you like.  I don't personally care if you like this or not.  But don't you think you might come across as rude? 
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BananaSam Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Whether or not it's coming off as rude, it's my opinion. The fact that you post art (or "art") on deviantart is getting an opinion from others. That's why I commented my thoughts.
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ErikRoger Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014
I know. But your opinion offered nothing artistic. Rather, you just more or less insulted her appearance (for whatever reason) and are passing it as a valid point because people give opinions of others' art on Deviant Art. Let me ask you what you would do to improve this picture. Or are thin subjects simply not allowed to be found as artistic and should be eliminated from history? That's what your comments imply. Would you also say that a model looks "scarily fat" because her big frame and butt freaks you out? I have a feeling you'd find that offensive if someone said that and just said it's their opinion, even though the picture would be from someone who clearly knows photography. Though, you'll probably save face and say, "Yeah, sure, of course someone can point out how someone is fat and freaky because that's their opinion," right?

All you basically said was that you don't like this because she's thin. You didn't say it's not allowed, it's not artistic, or porn as most do. You didn't tell them to post it on Tumblr instead. I even think you know it was taken by a professional. That's fine you think she's too thin and you don't like it and all but why even share it? I'm betting you'd be annoyed if you got several people saying nothing more than "I don't like it, looks freaky!" on your artworks.
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BananaSam Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Okay, I get what you mean. I guess it was more insulting than it was constructive criticism. Although I don't mean to be insulting however; skinny is fine as well as any other body type.
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