The sensuality in this picture is palpable. Anticipation? No, the lingering impact of an incredible night. The mussed sheets, pillow case nearly torn off, the composition of the room is just enough to accent the mood set by your model, and draw attention to her. This is all deliberate clearly and for that I give you your vision rating. The originality suffers, because frankly it's just been done before. Your technique is spot, it's a beautiful B&W with a subtle vignette. The impact was strong from the get go, the scene comes together beautifully, model, set, and the photograph itself meld to create the picture of sensuality. The only thing I could say as far as increasing that would be a slight tilt up of the head of your model, enough to catch a look in her eyes, have her gaze longingly off the side of the shot, or alternatively a tilt down and to the left/right to catch one revealed eye, and have the other concealed with her hair, I think that slight touch could have pushed the image over the edge. All in all, wonderfully done , I tip my hat to you.