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Your lighting and subject matter are very effective. Her facial expression is very compelling, but as far as the positioning goes it doesn't look like it would be as comfortable or relaxed as her face may suggest. The curve of her rear is beautifully accentuated by it, but the twist of her spine and shoulders looks less inviting and more like an awkward in-between-switching-positions. Perhaps if the model's upper body was moved slightly to the left, raising her left shoulder slightly, we would get a more relaxed looking position and a better view of her beautiful figure. Moving the frame itself slightly to the right of where it is with this changed position may allow for a reflected shape between her back and the bathtub, accentuating the curves and positions of both her upper and lower body visible.
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:iconhillarycoetzee:
hillarycoetzee Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2015  New member Hobbyist Photographer
curves for days
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:icongingado:
gingado Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013
Your work is featured in my "PICTURES OF AN EXHIBITION 2013 - Part I"...maybe you like it!
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:icongrafmason:
grafmason Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012
this is awesome.
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:iconsudor:
SUDOR Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012
Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious !
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:iconhueman69:
Hueman69 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Absolutely gorgeous photo!!!
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:iconundercheese101:
Undercheese101 Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2012
perfect picture...wow! All your work is amazing.
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:icondemonillusion:
DemonIllusion Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Professional General Artist
love this one.. her skin flows well with the tub!
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:icong-a-m:
g-a-m Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2012
:thumbsup:
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:iconsamsarasurfing1:
samsarasurfing1 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2012
Such beauty...wow...
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:iconspazzochka:
SpaZzochka Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2012
very sensual...and peaceful
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:iconvisual-aggression:
visual-aggression Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
So soft! It's a gentle atmosphere. Love your work :)
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:iconcshellzz:
Cshellzz Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2012  Student Photographer
Very Very nice I love the soft tones!!!
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:iconlovebob:
LoveBob Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Wowwwwwwwwwww... Flawless...

Great capture or sure... really artistic!!!
;o)))
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:iconvincan:
Vincan Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012
A beautiful well executed image.
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:iconakiraspectrum:
AkiraSpectrum Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012
best rear end i've seen <3
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:iconbebovoptic:
BeBovOptic Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012
Amazing... :heart:
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:iconmaarew:
maarew Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012
Very nice photo! Relaxing :)
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:iconevidentlychickentown:
EvidentlyChickentown Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012
lovely shot
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:icongoshin-ryu:
Goshin-RYU Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012
For a second there it almost look hand-drawn due to the greyish colour on the woman's face, but still I can't feel dreamy a little.

Still a nice photo though.
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:iconjadesoulrush:
jadesoulrush Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Professional Photographer
Lovely...
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:iconsuvelis:
Suvelis Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012
really beautiful :-)
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:iconlonermade:
lonermade Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Very dreamlike image, nicely done
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:iconpixelzealot:
PixelZealot Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012
well composed high key
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:iconammanda:
ammanda Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012
Excellent picture!!
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:iconedwardv:
Edwardv Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012
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:iconjoergjohannmueller:
JoergJohannMueller Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Lovely. Beautiful work. I like the high-key style.
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dolphintom Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Firstly, the fact that it was done in black and white is an excellent choice. The lighting effect giving a softer touch to the image is another excellent dimension. Add to that the curves of the tub coincide with the curves of the back and buttocks. The aperture setting, throwing the background out of focus is yet another effect that adds to the magnificence of this piece. At first I thought perhaps water in the tub would have added an element to the picture (hot water and steam) but on second thought I think it is much better as it is. Job well done. Congratulations.
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:icondolphintom:
dolphintom Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
excellent
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:icontalionn:
talionn Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012
Супер!
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:iconthedeviouschauffeur:
TheDeviousChauffeur Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012
A masterpiece. I love it.
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:iconparanagua:
Paranagua Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012
Lovely job of the lighting.
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:iconferdinandventer:
FerdinandVenter Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012
While i like this picture i would like it to have a little more contrast between background and foreground. I get the idea of steam\fog, but it doesn't work for me for some reason.
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:icongoldenlapis:
GoldenLapis Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Really nice, white this way she looks made of porcelain like the bathtub.
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:iconjan-k-fotografie:
Jan-K-Fotografie Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Breathtaking work! A bit like a dream ...
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:iconmicah230:
Micah230 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
lovely
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:iconrmh7069:
rmh7069 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Professional General Artist
Amazing composition.
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:iconcoreygsd:
CoreyGSD Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
nice work
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:iconloki7z:
Loki7z Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Very nice!
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:icongingado:
gingado Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012
Superb high-key work...:clap:
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:iconalembic-lynx:
Alembic-Lynx Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Professional Photographer
extraordinary beautiful like porcelain
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:icondashinvaine:
dashinvaine Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012
Beautiful vision.
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:iconfrodoprime:
FrodoPrime Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
lovely high key lighting and capture of a lazy mood; beautiful concentration on curves
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:iconcarnoni:
Carnoni Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Professional Photographer
This is a wonderful photo! I don't know if you created the background with lighting or with photoshop, if it was with photoshop, I like the photo a little less. Either way though, the idea is well executed. The white background, the white tub, the pale skin of the model gives it an angelic feel to it. Hopefully, that is what I will be greeted by when I get to the pearly gates. Or maybe it is hell, where you have that to feast your eyes on, but can't get close enough to it to touch...lol
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:icontomkilbane:
TomKilbane Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
just beautiful!!!!!
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:iconthe-mirrorball-man:
The-Mirrorball-Man Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It feels more like a drawing than like a photograph, for some reason.
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:iconlady-schnaps:
Lady-Schnaps Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Awesome !
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:iconvikkko:
vikkko Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012
Curves extends by themselves. Beautiful shot.
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adrian272727 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012
excellent!
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:iconn-l-e:
n-l-e Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
amazing
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:iconuzik:
Uzik Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012
Nicely done. The different levels of contrast draw the eye. Good composition too. Having a lovely model doesn't help either! Seems like a technique that could generate lots of good images. Going to do any more like it?
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