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Star Trek

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Revised and expanded version of the book "My favorite models" [link]
Irina Nekludova
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:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

I admire your work. Best Models sits proudly on my bookshelf, however this image is plain to me.

I have tried to analyse whether it is the standard posture of the model or the lack of interest generated through the background, however I believe it boils down to the lack of a story.

[link] This image of yours provokes questions into where she is, why does she need a hat without any other clothes.

[link] The setting for this image evokes that of a fairy tale. The surroundings to the girl offset her beauty with their stark degradation.

I find This image lacks those elements of story or questioning. Coupled with the pose not being particularly striking or flattering, it doesn't work for me.

Kind regards

Jb