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From my new book "Beauty uncensored". 

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Beauty uncensored by photoport
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OVERALL: Interesting theme: I'd call it 'raw', 'bare', or 'harsh'. "Beauty uncensored" is a great way to put it. It's not "Beauty Unlimited" but something rarer and subtler.
VISION: 5.0. Executing this concept is bold and adventuresome. You've brought together elements that show your vision well.
ORIGINALITY: 5.0. Combining an erotic image with 'bare reality', or, as you call it, "Beauty uncensored", is pretty much an unexplored area. Prior art is either as beautiful or as raw as possible. This is unique in my rather limited experience.
TECHNIQUE: 5.0. I can't imagine how you thought to bring all these elements together but they all have similar effect. It's amazing. Gray sheets (neither clean nor dirty), simple hair with a simple part, a woman wearing large, black, plastic-framed glasses, a soft light from (probably) a window that is harsh in its light (qualities), the model showing us her sex through the plain, simple, white, sheer, (polyester) cloth, un-retouched color of her sex, a little bit of stubble there, some of the rear showing through her legs, and the unnatural position and Dutch angle. Brilliant.
IMPACT: 2.5. Impact is not this image's point (or purpose).
NOTES: Her right arm at the top of the biceps has a light spot that looks like it was put in during retouch. A final note: this image doesn't speak to me so writing a critique has been challenging. I hope it has some value to you.
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denermartinezlima Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2017
Awesome!
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haster692 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2016  Student Photographer
Lovely girl
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GreyAreaRK1 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2016
I love the nerdy appeal.
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TheSkullgrin140 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Pale and very lovely. 
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rustyblood Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2016
Incredibly, very very beautiful take, thanks for sharing !!
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WedigeSpanker Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Very nice, lovely looking girl there :)
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ShlalomMasters Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2016
Lovely :)
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PanRafik Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
<3
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DjEtla Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2016
Heh -- the whole photo is great and amazing. Among other things I really like the glasses.
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MichaelCPhotography Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2016   Photographer
Very hot shot... gorgeous model!
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richc1958 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2016
beautiful work of a beautiful lady
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