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:iconbalthesaur:
I love this shot! It seems like it was cut from a scene in a movie; the door opens with a clang, the nerdy (but ruggedly handsome) male is caught unawares - jaw agape, the young lady stands there and asks the coy little question, "Can I borrow some sugar?"

Anywhoo, the lighting is excellent and the model is absolutely fabulous! The only thing that I may suggest in the future is to add a blurred foreground shot of the nerdy handsome male, slightly off the frame; perhaps just at that moment before he falls out of his chair backwards.

Fantastic job! :)
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:iconrowleyandzia:
rowleyandzia Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
You have an enviable relationship with your neighbor.
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:iconbenlv:
BenLV Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2014  Professional Photographer
Some serious locks, man!
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:iconchalkartist1216:
ChalkArtist1216 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That's some neighborhood you live in!  Any vacancies?   :D
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:iconmarvsamune:
Marvsamune Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Coffee or sugar????
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:iconfirestorm31z:
firestorm31z Featured By Owner May 13, 2014
This Kris is rather pretty.  wouldn't mind meeting her tho!
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:iconcat-fonts:
CAT-Fonts Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014  Professional Artist
Whatever she want, I would let her in :-)  Why don't I have neigbors like that?
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:iconmaironmatos:
maironmatos Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014
Perfect,very pretty!
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:iconintouch:
intouch Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014
Clearly you and I live in very different neighborhoods.  I like yours better.
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:iconqd30quiet:
qd30quiet Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014
What a neighbor. Does she loan u "sugar"?
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:iconbenhammonds:
BenHammonds Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013   Writer
would enjoy living in that neighborhood :)!! She is pretty!!
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:iconomejis:
OMEJIS Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013
hello...:clap:
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:iconam501:
AM501 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013
gorgeous model,nice storie
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:icongregpuck:
gregpuck Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Professional Photographer
The concept, the woman, the lighting are all just wonderful! Love the picture!
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:iconcarlmann:
carlmann Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
your fucking neighbor?   my neighbor is pushing 250.   how do you get drop dead gorgeous women to pose for you?   You must be living in an alternate reality
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:icongavieru:
GavieRu Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013
skeleton one lady ;/
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:iconlucretius13:
lucretius13 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013
so sweet!!


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:iconmanovich-art:
Manovich-art Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013
Mmm standing on her toes? Or airbrushed high heels?
Whatever an interestingly lit image. She does not need sugar she is sweet enough.
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:icondark123456a:
dark123456a Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013
wow
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:iconad-dev:
AD-Dev Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013
Ah, that's just beautiful.
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:iconpelicanh:
Pelicanh Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Professional Photographer
Beautiful shot. It says a lot about you that your neighbor has that must trust and comfort with you. Good to see. Keep up the great work.
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:iconsidmod:
Sidmod Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Kris is a very confident neighbour by the looks of things. Gd for her.
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:iconmartonrobert:
martonrobert Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
:)
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:iconxtrothearctic:
xtrothearctic Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013
Was this shot in Turkey? This amount of door locks are only required in Turkey :)
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:iconromanticid10t:
romanticid10t Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013
I want to live in your neighborhood! Beautiful shot! :thumbsup:
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:iconuturn190:
uturn190 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
She is fantastic!!
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:iconsamiguy101:
SAMIGUY101 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013  Professional Photographer
She almost looks like a 3D doll  . . . PERFECT!!!
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:iconwestcpw:
westcpw Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
nice neighbour
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:icongtpete:
gtpete Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
that's a super friendly neighbor
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:iconfangled-robin:
Fangled-Robin Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013
Nescafe moments on a daily basis, nice and a fave for me.
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:iconcloud2493:
cloud2493 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013
i tought this was a digital frame, is a great shot and model jus WOW!!!
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:icondecogoddess:
DecoGoddess Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Delightful !
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:iconuratz-studios:
Uratz-Studios Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Professional Artisan Crafter
Howdy neighbor
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:iconlithiumalchemist:
LithiumAlchemist Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013
I liked this til I saw her feet. Standing on tip toe like that makes the rest of the pose feel forced and uncomfortable.
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:iconerikroger:
ErikRoger Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013
Elegant yet casual.  Nice combination.
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:icongtcopc:
gtcopc Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
:heart: rvmp :heart: rvmp :heart: rvmp :heart: rvmp :heart: rvmp
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:icongasman201:
gasman201 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013
Lovely with coffee cup but face seems to blur.
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:iconradiatedturkey:
RadiatedTurkey Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013
Very nice.  Too bad she's anorexic.  And all the people who want to make fat jokes about me may carry-on.
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:iconbanjakd1:
BanJAKD1 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013
Oh come on, you have to give her sugar now!
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:iconzhadow125:
zhadow125 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Student General Artist
watch for the noise in the background thats on the ceiling try using the blur tool to push back the background and make her pop out more, also the piece feels like it has more than one focal point try making her sorroundings B&W and make her and cup only color darken the background a little.

great composition
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:iconrvmagic:
rvmagic Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Professional General Artist
Did you give her that cup of whatever it was she wanted to borrow? Well composed and lighted photograph.
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:iconlorigarnerart:
LoriGarnerArt Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013
My husband wants your address to move to your neighborhood. ;)
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:iconkannagara:
kannagara Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013
why is it that almost all of the prettiest girls seem to be birthed in russian neighborhoods?  :confused:
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:iconand3ze:
and3ze Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Your neighbour needs a burger.
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:iconkannagara:
kannagara Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013
poor little burger troll. feeling a bit pudgy are ya? ;)
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:iconpopandroid:
popandroid Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013
yeah fatty fatty fat face!
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:iconjan-k-fotografie:
Jan-K-Fotografie Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Stunning work! Fantastic!
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:iconandikunar:
AndiKunar Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Amazing!!!
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:iconnoirraven:
noirraven Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I wish she was my neighbour!  Wow!

Beautiful shot!
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:icontravelzoom:
Travelzoom Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013
I want such a neighbor! Very nice an wonderfull woman that you took on this picture, very natural, I like this. With the cup it seems, sche envited to a cup of coffee ... realy nice picture
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:iconadastra14:
Adastra14 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
that's too lucky to be real dude... :D
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