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My e-books!

The secret life of the Angel - NEW!
Beauty uncensored 1
Beauty uncensored 3
Sensual nudity
My favorite models
Railway novel​
Naya+Italy
Lo​
Italian holidays Hotel romance​
Hong Kong. With love
Weekend in Apokryfo​

Ok, here you go. Compared to the other image I commented on from this set, this one has much better lighting on the face and eyes, although it looks like it might be post-production. The direct gaze is wonderful and the posture is excellent, although it is a little more modest and uncertain, not quite as powerful as the other image. Unfortunately, it looks like the focus is on the sleeve of the gown wrapped around her arm and not her face...either that or the face has been softened (or perhaps she moved). This is really bright light, so the DOF should include the door maybe all the way to the table (which is a slight distraction). Again, her face should be a major highlight in at least one third of the images in a set. A good gauge of clarity is being able to count individual eye-brow hairs in the raw high-resolution image. The gown in this image is glowing from the backlight, which provides a nice contrast, creates the perception that she is in a shadow. A couple of reflectors would have helped here. My apologies to the model about her tightly crossed legs in the other critique. I can see from this shot that she has nice muscle tone in her legs.
Image size
4611x6051px 7.57 MB
Make
Canon
Model
Canon EOS 5D Mark II
Shutter Speed
1/500 second
Aperture
F/4.0
Focal Length
84 mm
ISO Speed
320
Date Taken
Jul 19, 2017, 4:23:05 PM
Sensor Size
30mm
Mature
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And there is the ultimate dream girl. I'd give anything to catch her eye and heart. She is the epitome of perfection. Classic beauty, seductive, gorgeous, and just the right amount of innocence.