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Image size
2809x3000px 2.48 MB
Make
Canon
Model
Canon EOS 6D
Shutter Speed
1/40 second
Aperture
F/2.0
Focal Length
50 mm
ISO Speed
640
Date Taken
Sep 22, 2013, 5:25:34 PM
Sensor Size
18mm
Mature
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I love this photo, the model is beautiful you have great lighting and the environment has a classic but modern feel to it. However as a fellow photographer I do notice there are some things that are bothersome to me. First of all, the clutter. It gives a "lived" in feel but it distracts from the focal point being this beautiful model you have here. These are changes that can be fixed in a matter of seconds. The drawer needs to be closed, it is ever so slightly open that it catches the eye too frequently. The Water bottle and chords in the bottom right need to be moved or cropped out. Your model should remove all unneeded accessories (ring and undergarments). Mind you I'm critiquing this as though you set this photo shoot up. It's come to my attention as I'm writing this that this very well could be a candid shot, if that's the case then leave as is but judging by her posture, angle from which the photo was captured I am going to safely assume you asked her to drop her panties and sit up on the chair. Which I am not criticising at all. Thank you for that. Overall I think this is a wonderful photo that was composed very well. Once more you have a beautiful woman posing for you, a beautiful environment and great lighting. I hope you understand where I'm coming from in the things I pointed out. Keep up the great work!